Agenda for Friday 11/22

by | Nov 22, 2019 | Agenda

Today’s agenda

1. Review tasks for the today

2. Team needs to make the following post on their team blog

— problem

— solution

— product description (features)

— value proposition

— marketing update (what have your accomplished (tagline,

— product development (what has been accomplished

— business operations (diagram showing how the business will operate)

— transactions (diagram showing how the customer will interact with your business)

— website (wireframes… what is the status of this deliverable… how many pages are finished)

3. Meet Up with all teams

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Feedback on Presentations 11/19

by | Nov 20, 2019 | Feedback

Below are my comments for each of yesterday’s presentations.

I suggest that you read all the comments even if the comments are not directed to your project.

Pave

You want to pay attention to your use of language. For example, you say, “plastic production is going up”. This is everyday language that is vague and requires further explanation on your part. Business owners will go say this in a presentation as this kind of language will suggest that they are inexperienced.

A more authoritative and credible way of stating the below is: 300 million tons of plastic are produced each year with 50% of this plastic being produced for single-use purposes. In addition, 8 million tons of plastics are dumped into our oceans.

This is a more informative way of presenting the problem.

To all plastic groups:

There is a need to make clear and detailed descriptions for your startups.

Consider this way of structuring your description

Company name is a startup venture designed to address the (adjective) plastic waste problem that threaten our (ecosystem, planet, our lives) by (describe what your company does).